I kind of want to copy everything wendelah said about this story and say exactly! I love Lincoln's quiet support, his 'no big deal' response. Liv's withdrawal at being subjected to 'lab-tests'
I love the paragraph about how the horizon never shimmers, the GPS, and a world solidifying around her - the comparison to amber - all of which struck that right chord of wonder. It's the little details I'm fond of. Lovely fill.
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Re: "A Very Empty Room"
Date: 2011-12-25 01:39 am (UTC)I love the paragraph about how the horizon never shimmers, the GPS, and a world solidifying around her - the comparison to amber - all of which struck that right chord of wonder. It's the little details I'm fond of. Lovely fill.